Jealousy is the rain like
A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl
In the first week of her puberty.
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Thank you sir for your kind remarks. Tonight I would comment on it, just after 2 hours.
ealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. Wow, what a wonderful write. A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art. 10++++++
A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art. 10++++++
A comparison between first puberty that disturbs a tiny girl and disobedient rain and jealousy both of which make the mind unsettled. Thanks poet for this marvel of art.
Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. A nice haiku describing the emotion jealousy. 10 for it.
Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. Wow a poem comparing puberty with the emotion jealousy and the first rains. Thanks for the lovely poem. 10+++
Jealousy is the rain like A Childish, Obstinate, playful and craving girl In the first week of her puberty. What a beautiful comparison with a girl's life. Loved it. 10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
GOOD POETRY iF YOU WANT COMMENTS READ OTHERS NOW ME I SEE MOST OF YOU DON'T READ OTHERS NOR COMMENT WHY have u on friends list say good puberty urs this one
Thanks for the gracious remarks and the sweet complain. I am sorry to have neglected my friend. Regards. Subhas