Embrace Poem by Rohan Nambiar

Embrace

Rating: 5.0


Chastic beauty of full moon
Shades light in my room
Encroaching clouds may
Hide out beauty of moon

Soothing breeze through window
Whispers something in my ear
Jeleous angels eyeing on
Beauty of ages on earth

Chorus of stars lit up
Shooting light of gloom
Humanes & vehicles rest
With a silence of leisure

Shadows of fairies glimpse
Make howling foxes to the bright
Reptiles may curse the light
That made the prey to escape

Watching through the window
Saw a child climbing up the hill
Raising his hands and leaning
To embrace the lovely moon

Tried and tried untill
Hides a cloud under its belt
Out in the room being mature
Thoughts of similar arose in me

Lean and embrace the adored beauty
Was my wife with child
Raising my hands to hug her
Sleeping child made a cry

May be had a bad dream
Saw his half lit eyes with fear
Embraced him with a smile
A pat on his back made him sleep

Embraced my wife with love
Days and years passed
My friends mother died
Embraced him with sad

Still I am in a dilemma
How, when, what to embrace
Realisation of facts, thoughts
Good or bad depends on person

Chastic beauty of full moon
Resides there untill day is on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nancy Sedky 05 August 2008

secure...warmth is what i felt in ur words...one of the best work i've ever read.alot of people love...alot of people write but few who can express &deliver their feelings through simple words...u made it...way 2 go.good luck

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 August 2008

How to express one's love and affection? Mankind has found out a way out. Apart from kissing and other methods of expression, embracing is one that expresses one's deep love for the other. A good and rare subject taken for this poem.

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Sherif Monem 04 August 2008

Great Rohan. What I would add is to break the poem into segments, four lines a piece may be. Leave you in peace. Sherif

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Sandra Fowler 04 August 2008

The moon has inspired the pen of poets time out of mind. A series of very nice images. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sherif Monem 03 August 2008

Ver beautiful and Romantic. Great.

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