Early Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Early Dawn

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Ascendancy of dawn besieges the earth
To and fro globules of mist represent glee.
Perishing wind perplexes the body and mind
Blithe and blur play hide and seek.

Dawn chorus embellishes the beauty glance
At above and beneath the juxtaposed trees
Along with the attractive periwinkles,
Blooming sapling and flower plants
And arouses the benignant hermits, nuns, prophets
And the mullah to adore God on behalf of the
Devotees are in temples, churches and mosques.

Serenity of environment in pale moonlit of
Crescent moon waits to caress the soothing sun beam.

Sunday, July 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Description of an early dawn of winter season.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 27 July 2015

Serenity of environment in pale moonlit of Crescent moon waits to caress the soothing sun beam. A nice description of dawn.....................10

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Early dawn and the spirituality it imparts are beautifully captured in this beautiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2015

Devotees! ! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Early dawn has motivational power. This gives us nice sensation. We feel and motivate life. Nature’s beauty has great power of motivation. This is nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Pauline Russell xA wonderful description of the breaking day! ! Very well inked! ! 26 Jul 2015 by Pauline Russell | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xwonderfully penned Sir... thank you for sharing.. 26 Jul 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Scott Hemingway xNice write. 26 Jul 2015 by Scott Hemingway | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is wonderful and engaging. Thank you for sharing. 26 Jul 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply picture of Rebecca Joy xfantastic write 26 Jul 2015 by Rebecca Joy | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xgreat write 26 Jul 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Chris Fortune xGreat write! 26 Jul 2015 by Chris Fortune | Reply picture of World of Colour xNicely put together 26 Jul 2015 by World of Colour | Reply picture of Lynda Robson xA lovely write with great imagery, thanks 27 Jul 2015 by Lynda Robson | Reply picture of Michael Cardinal xSuch elegance portrayed in this magnificent write 27 Jul 2015 by Michael Cardinal | Reply picture of Kesav Easwaran xSoothing imagery in this dawn poem Kumarmani...liked a lot 28 Jul 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply picture of.. magnolia xGorgeous poetry...gives me a serene feel, thank you 28 Jul 2015 by.. magnolia | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xNicely done Sir. 26 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 August 2015

A beauty relating to break of dawn. Mesmerizing drop.

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 August 2015

An early morning scene captured beautifully through the lens of this poem. Got engrossed in it.

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Valsa George 28 July 2015

This is a strikingly beautiful description of a misty dawn! Enjoyed the poem! A 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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