Dream Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The fate of all haiku beautiful

How sadly true- -yet the old one has weathered many storms in life and its perfume of wisdom should have a depth and artistry that the youngest has yet to acquire- -ah, the ways of life are sometimes upside down, aren't they?

A well executed piece. Truly excellent...5 stars+++

Good dreams are like fresh flowers giving joy and fragrance and it is cherished by everyone! No one loves a withering flower. A bad dream is like a withering flower! Very concise! Also beautiful comparison!

Dream along and, Float into another realm! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Why let your dreams wither? Even the flower returns each season and spreads as the years go by.

Bravo my dear Bravo! ! ! ! ! !

Fantastic short work.....thank u.....

Dream like the flower In youth it spreads sweet fragrance None greets withered one {{{{ beautiful three liners

beautiful three liners you are; nice about dream