Distance Blurs. Poem by Fay Slimm

Distance Blurs.

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Windswept, my heart,
................ now bleeding with wait, sees
The same grey dawn wake
................................... another new day
Without you.
............... The cold feel of sad freezes
My weary mind,
...................... and as a pale sun delays
Further shine by shrouding
................................. with cloudlets, wet
Drops slide gently
...................... like solitaire gems down
The windowpane.
....................... Rain will help me forget
How your sunshine turned
.................... cartwheels of love around
My every day once.
....................... Now wet distance blurs
Even your smile.
............. How could this have occured?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 03 November 2009

wonderful - no need to say anything else

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Sonya Florentino 28 October 2009

tears blur the vision as memories soak the mind..... (sniffle!)

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Bob Gibson 21 October 2009

Our world is a window, in the passage of time there is no rhyme or reason there is no we or mine! loves passions are truly torn from my heart no man on earth can keep us apart

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Tsira Goge 20 October 2009

....................... Rain will help me forget How your sunshine turned .................... cartwheels of love around My every day once. ............................................................ it's so fine, Fay 10... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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