Deep Within These Brown Eyes Poem by Jennifer Cook

Deep Within These Brown Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Deep within these brown eyes,
You can see my sadness,
The tears that roll down my face,
The sadness I feel,
Awkward moment of my silence,
What hurts more that my sadness makes me as if time was going slow,
So far,
This was war,
War that never ended,
Deep within these brown eyes,
I would die for you,
Leaving everything behind,
Never coming back,
Never to be back on this earth,
Don't you dare bring me back,
Under the water I drown in my sorrows,
Die not regretting,
Regrets is all feel,
Blame things on myself,
Bringing me down with these sorrow,
The shame I feel,
How hateful the world has become,
Things was never perfect with me,
Deep within these brown eyes,
You'll see my true sadness I had to suffer alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

i liked the poem and i hope that you wont feel that way anymore.

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Coo Cavender 08 September 2006

I like the poem and hope that the sadness leaves you if it is real but the poem is great i give it a 10

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Mary Nagy 07 September 2006

I think brown eyes are the most beautiful. My husband and 2 out of my 3 kids have brown eyes....(lucky them!) I've thought about writing about the depths of their eyes but never have. I enjoyed your poem Jennifer. Hopefully the sadness expressed here is not true for you. Sincerely, Mary

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