Deep Mists Of Longing Blur The Land Poem by Christopher John Brennan

Deep Mists Of Longing Blur The Land

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Deep mists of longing blur the land
as in your late October eve:
almost I think your hand might leave
its old caress upon my hand —
for sure this floating world of dream
hath touch'd that far reality
of memory's heaven; nor would I deem
the chance a strange one, if to thee
my feet should stray ere fall the night,
or, reaching to that lucent shore,
these eyes should wake on tenderer light
to greet the spring and thee once more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 October 2018

Such a wonderful poem by Christopher John Brennan......................

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 October 2018

A thoughtfully envisioned love song expressing longing for meeting the love gone away.

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Adrian Flett 25 October 2018

The sad tenderness of loss so well and gently set out in this short poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 October 2018

excellent - if to thee my feet should stray ere fall the night- - -these eyes should wake on tenderer light to greet the spring /// great pen

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 October 2018

Floating world of dream! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 October 2019

Floating world of dreams... reaching to that lucent shore and deep mists of longing." Great expressions deserving classic poem of the day.

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Andrew Blakemore 25 October 2019

A very well written piece

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Ruta Mohapatra 25 October 2019

Ethereal! Enchanting!

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 October 2019

A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2019

for sure this floating world of dream hath touch'd that far reality of memory's heaven; .....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem is well executed by Christopher John Brennan.

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