Deep Into Ocean Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Deep Into Ocean



Deep into

She was listening
And looking
On down side
She was to decide

"Saba: means morning breeze
I got cold and was not surprised
She was down to earth very pretty
Just symbol to present natural beauty

I though her big role
And so called
"Can you be my guide"?
She again went down with face to hide

I don't know what was prompting
But I was honestly attempting
To go near and know
What was she doing now?

I was rather much influenced
I knew she will not answer even if forced
But still I wanted quick answer
And blew the whistle for her

Still I remained blank
And sank
Deep into ocean
With face never to be shown

Deep Into Ocean
Friday, June 10, 2016
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2016

With face never to be shown. Nice work.

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Still I remained blank And sank Deep into ocean With face never to be shown

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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