Crazy Poem by Rini Shibu

Crazy

Rating: 5.0


A Little bit and give me more
More and more, a little more
more of your love, makes me whole
Whole of your love kills my soul
Never again I should ask to pour
Give me now till I choke
It will be cool from the core
Just like a drink of coke
A little bit more or nothing at all
I am hungry to take more
Everyday more and more

Sunday, October 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: crazy,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

Oh! What a wonferful poem it is. More and more, a little more of love... wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for visiting this poem Rini

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Robert Murray Smith 20 July 2018

Crazy in love. With more development it could make the charts as a hit song. Have a go.+++10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

To be crazy in love is a beauty and a beauty is a joy for ever.

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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018

Thank you so much Akhtarji for your lovely comment..! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017

A delightful little poem Rini Lovely expression...10

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Such a crazy love actually: Give me now till I choke love is the only feeling that choking with remains sweet Houda Boukassoula

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Rini Shibu 23 December 2017

Thanks for posting your feedback Houda

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Bit by bit More and more, till there's no more 10 out of 10 wonderful poem about the temptation of love Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Mario, I'm pleased that you liked it

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