Couplet 444 Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Couplet 444

Rating: 5.0

All day long a country song's been running through my head.
I just don't see why it can't be a brand new poem instead.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes a poem will percolate in my head for days before I write it down or post it on PH. Today all that's percolating in there is the song 'Saginaw Michigan' by Lefty Frizzel.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Belle Wassermeister 16 May 2024

You can't go WRONG with a country SONG! Great couplet!

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Kim Barney 20 May 2024

Thanks, Belle. I just wish I could get that song out of my head!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 16 May 2024

I love the internal rhymes in this couplet. Well done!

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Kim Barney 20 May 2024

Gracias, mi amigo.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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