I've had some people love me. I hope some have loved YOU too!
Some have 'said' they no longer loved me! How could that be true?
It boggles ** my mind that 'that' could, for anyone, ever be the case.
Perhaps my standards were 'too high'. Perhaps they needed 'space' ***!
(September 26th 2023)
Bri edwards
aka Brian Edward Whitaker
:)
** boggle: '(of a person or a person's mind) be astonished or overwhelmed when trying to imagine something
*** [ need ] space: 'Space" can mean a lot of things. Maybe they need an evening per week to watch Netflix on their own, travel for a week, or go out with friends more often. They may also be referring to "emotional space." For example, if you have a habit of trying to fix their problems, they might need you to let them figure it out.'
Love is a complex feeling.The lover is in a constant state of self doubt.Even after being assured thousand times, he still questions whether his beloved loves him.(Part-1)
Heck, I KNOW my wife loves me. HOW could she NOT? ? ! ! So what if she sometimes says she DOESN'T? ? ? ? She isn't in her right mind anyway, proven by the fact that she married me! ! ! !
Kingsley Egbukole says she sent comment(s) & I have (some) faith that it/they WILL show up......EVENTUALLY! ! bri
Sometimes love can go sour for a number of reasons. Beautiful poem
So nicely written. May be true. Everyone need a space now a days.
Space? A spaceship needs space. A space heater needs space. Two typed words need a 'space' between them. So, of course, people need 'space' as well. : )
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(Part-2) Hi Bri, perhaps you are in this state of self doubt.
'self-doubt'? ? About WHAT, Bharati? ? ? ? Would I, bri, have need to doubt myself? ! I have enough people & things to doubt! ! ! THANKS for your comment. ;) bri