Coming Home. Poem by Fay Slimm

Coming Home.

Rating: 5.0


Home is within the Self.
All voyage brings us there.
To be aware of welcome
We would have been sharing
Our love. Now departing
From distant shores we find
New ways toward the start
For home. Loth to leave behind
Adventure, yet singing
Of eternity, we find
Balance which joy in Self brings.
Homecoming then feels fine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

Homecoming feels great always! ! ! lovely written poem my friend...10+++

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Tsira Goge 27 July 2009

Very beautiful poem... After trip - the house - paradise..10.. / Thank you, Fay/ Tsira

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Sue Sie 27 July 2009

No place like home eh...a warm poem Fay...10+ Sue

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

There is no place like home indeed! ! ! ! ! you know Fay.. my mom always say.. i waste too much time at internet and playing video games.. she doesn't understand.. it i mean..... home is beautiful indeed... i mean lot better than complicated university life.... with lots of love shan

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Andrew Blakemore 28 July 2009

Wherever we travel throughout the world one place remains special in our hearts and that is home. A very beautiful poem Fay. Best wishes, Andrew

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

nice cognitive metaphor: ''Home is within the Self.'' wonderful psychoanalytic poem....10++++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 August 2009

The Sun, the moon, the stars, the sand and the sea, brought me to where, I belong.........home.

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Gordon Wilkinson 05 August 2009

I liked the crispness of this one fay - 10

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Scott Austin 05 August 2009

Peace can be found in these words you have expressed in this write. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Scott

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Ency Bearis 04 August 2009

a nice poem...home sweet home nothing can compare...its always a wondeful feeling in coming home...10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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