Cloudburst Poem by Jacqui Broad

Cloudburst

Rating: 5.0


The sky is crying,
the same as my heart's weeping.
Can you build an arc?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 25 November 2011

I wish the sun, peeps in from the raining clouds and you become lucky and witness the rainbow.. Take care :)

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Asif Andalib 25 November 2011

What a fantastic haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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Harindhar Reddy 25 November 2011

Yes it is a good poem by J on D. What about me dear Jacqui.... at-least Speak about your harry.......Just for fun ha! ha! ha! 10+++++++ rating! Miss you.......................

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 November 2011

After every heavy storm, the sun come out again.i hope you find peace in you heart one day & just thank God He made you meet such a remarkable person like D in your life...though he's gone but he'll live forever in your heart Jacqueline...!

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Crimson Love 25 November 2011

So much said, with few words...brilliant write...truly captivating. :)

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Renu Kakkar 19 January 2012

a very good haiku...liked it immensely

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Federico del Corazón 23 December 2011

Jacquie, always able to capture life’s true moments. A question for you, what would you put in your Arc?

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Melancholy Man 30 November 2011

Wow! Such power and depth in only 3 lines - very well written.

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Hans Vr 26 November 2011

Can feel the loss in this very nice haiku. Wish you lots of strength

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Eric Cockrell 26 November 2011

loading up hammers, nails, and boards to send you! short, and powerful! good poem!

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