Clasp My Heart Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Clasp My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Clasp my heart
To your sleeves
Rather then
Suffocate me
In your heart
Do not
Chain my spirit
To satisfy your
Male haughtiness.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Clasp My Heart
Friday, August 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love is all about giving space to grow as individuals and respect the ither persons dreams. It's all about growing together.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 21 August 2020

Very true words. Love is all about growing together not about suffocating but to give space.

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2020

I agree with your Thoughtful views expressed under Poet's Notes and feel very bad after reading your poem. Women in this part of the world, by and large, have not been treated as equals due to 'Male haughtiness' which is too prevalent in the society. Thanks for sharing.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 23 August 2020

I concur with your thought in this beautiful composition, Aarzoo.

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Nabakishore Dash 06 December 2021

Do not chain my spirits is a brave expression.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2021

I appreciate the voice of this straightforward write...5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 25 August 2020

This is all because of False EGO, Like two wheels, they run parallel to each other on the path of this life. The so called " Society" drew a line of control between the two. Kabhi na kabhi ye duriyan khatm ho jayegi, khul jayega pinjra panchi udd jayega gagan me... Another thought provoking poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 August 2020

Beautiful poem, dear Aarzoo. Absolutely! Love is about giving space and freedom. You cannot hold people so tight that it is difficult to breathe. A poem effectively presented with few words.........10

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Anjandev Roy 24 August 2020

Do not Chain my spirit......significant.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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