the clouds were charcoal
with deep azure peeking through
sun and mists clashing
beautiful drama
surprised, eyes turned to the skies
on the path of blooms
ever changing days
what we knew gone suddenly
in the sapphire haze
"beautiful drama surprised, eyes turned to the skies on the path of blooms"…the wonder of life, beautifully penned!
Beautifully penned. Love the imagery and how you connect it with human life. Scenes change quickly just like our life. Bravo!
A beautiful ode to the enchanting colours of nature, skies. But the poem is equally metaphorical as I take it as a commentary on life, the human race and on the gaiety of Mother Earth. Top
You out assumed quite rightly, as to this poem's meaning. Thank you for your kind comments.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly a magnificent poem!
Thank you for the joy your remarks bring.