As thoughts are chopping
My mind
Knife is cutting
My finger
As my finger is
Crying red
My mind is treating
My red thoughts
'No celestial being
Will descend
To cook for you'
My heart says
Fungal mind
Shrinking esophagus
Stomach is deprived
Of its hourly wages
''No celestial being Will descend To cook for you' - these lines are saddening to me, as these remind me of the hard work my mom did to keep us fed. No celestial being helped her either! Thank you, dear poet, for your thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
It is a great write, well crafted poem - - While mind is busy in thoughts, hands busy in cooking - -The distraction cuts the finger- -The hurt has to be healed by Self as there is no one else to help.To my poem list.
mind is mind as the leader of life directs all alpha to omega of life it cooks according to realistic life to serve the hungry heart!
Chopping to cook is a delightful poem that highlights the daily routine. As long as we live, it is important to be practical whatever the mind says. Fungal mind Shrinking esophagus Stomach is deprived Of its hourly wages..........super verse! ......5 Stars
This is rhasphody. Magnificent metaphorical play. The cooking mind amidst all. Beautiful.
Excellent, no two thoughts while cooking specially while cutting vegetables, I see humour, philosophy and witty/wise decorative words.10**********
Let me quote from this lovely poem- - As thoughts are chopping My mind Knife is cutting My finger As my finger is Crying red My mind is treating My red thoughts
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is so sad, if you cut your finger and it cries with blood during chopping. You should be very careful with magnetic mind. Attentiveness will help you in avoiding you such trouble. We hope, celestial being will help you to recover soon from cut. This poem is very brilliantly penned...5 stars..