There was a hearth;
a fire there;
chairs;
and, I remember, love;
all else was there,
and did not need to name itself.
Beautiful. A perfect expression; not another word needed. I wish I could write like this!
Never a word wasted succinct and speaks volumes in a few chosen phrases
Contentment in short but the imagery was amazing... All we need a few cues from a great mind and you've mastered the art in it.
Simply beautiful poem Mr. Shepherd, thanks for sharing. rate is 10 for me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You take these 21 words, place them on paper via pen (of course) , and Paint a love scene that i can picture in my Mind's eye, as i comment here.As simple as that, that is unless i refer to my own fabricated diction, but everyone has their right to opinion, & i like this piece, and though I have not checked 'word origin' I will go on my admiration for you &assume all is what it should be, Michael...As usual, a masterfuly, succinct work; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; POPEYE, THE tRaIlBlAzEr