Broken Hopes Poem by Afzal Shauq

this is a lovely poem..i appreciate the simplicity of the words written here..simple are the words but it reach everyone's heart..this is very beautiful..i really like the way this poem represents..it is presentable..grace

Nice poem, although its short, but i really like the deep feelings these words reflect..

Nice poem, although its short, but i really like the deep feelings these words reflect..

A new way of putting how one feels when most loving hope happens to break and make us to live with it without our will in it.Beautifully brought out the pain of the heart in the few lines from the depth of a feeling heart. Winnie

am not a really poet and not a very good one either but for a child who doesnt know how to read poems YOUR POEMS ARE ONE OF A KIND! you were born to do it and i like the way u explain stuff you always look deep in every thing

Broken hope to carry requires grit and in short you’ve done that …and it like keeping hope alive in next phase Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

i read some of your poems &i love how you write short ones. xp but this was my favorite because my hopes are always broken. so i can relate to this one. its beautiful.<3

Short but telling stories; that's a poem I love, it touches me. Love, Martine

We can grow old, become realistic, settle down, start to see people how it is not how we want to see: : : : we can undrstand in a second a lie an act of cruellness can destroy all we built through the years: : : : ..but losing hope......this is worst can hppen to us.....cause hope cn be the reason to waing up and face the day: : : : : WE must never lose hope.....there are many people who maakes this world better, who respect, helps and believe the others...... doesnt matter if the bad ones re noissy and took desitions nd paly theyr cards....there will always be perssons who light our wy and give us hope.... never them them win and take our Hope away: : : : great poem Afzal, yoyu hould hve hope cuse youre good man who respect others....do you know waht the vue of respect? ? ? ?

meaningful poem...a metaphor of determination....nice write....10