Bri Edwards Poem Comment Poem by Krakatoa Kritic 007
Bri Edwards Poem Comment
Bri E. may be so smart, but his meter's opaque
with a density quotient, the Gods might forsake.
Tongue in cheek, web's undone, but with spasms of fun,
and he rhymes, so he wins! Hope no evil Bri twins'
in the closet, past-postal on poems that pose
in-depth pulchritude, content, punch syllable's nose!
Let's leave room - puns play part, for perverse forms of art,
time that melts, colored dots; watch Bri's muse tied in knots!
Krakatoa Kritic #007
Does a poem that promotes your humility suggest you're humble?
Hmm! Well, as a grateful immigrant, I try to give Americans a lot
of rope, but I've got my eye on you, Bri! An 8+ to 9- for a fun self-
effacement that sounds fair!
See Bri Edward's poem 'Bri's So Smart! ! ….[ The Truth Must Be
Told! ]'
BRI [the 2nd], Call me. Do it or I will never get another wink of sleep! ! ! ! Yeah, right! ! ! I'LL GET A MILLION WINKS! ! ! : ) bri [the 1st]
4 - line 5 " past-postal" It's better than being premenstrual. Yes, i WAS a postal employee, but only drove my fellow employees to " go postal" * * " now usually means that someone is about to go nuts" NOW, about " humility" , 'my middle name': -Yes, it DOES suggest it. -If you give me ENOUGH rope i may hang myself with it, ...maybe on a cross. -thanks for 'plugging' my poem bri :)
You are welcome! Tee Hee! Not to worry Mr. Edwards! I've always liked most nuts, even voted for Trump! My guess is you are more there than going but I think I detect an inner pussycat? Give me a higher rating and I'll purr! Also I also just joined PoetrySoup and so I'm plugging you there as well. I'm a NRA member with an expert rating, just so you know! Are you Irish? Have you kissed the Blarney Stone?
3 - line 2 the Gods DO forsake me, with reason; i am a threat to their magnificence line 4 I am my own Evil Twin; no one can do it better! line 5 If i WERE " gay" , i'd do all i could to kick myself out of any closet; Rock Hudson and I were ONLY friends! ! (cont.)
Are you saying that your closeted twin is the gay one and you are not because you claim to be straight? I'm confused!
2 - pulchritude [a word I, Bri, have/has HEARD, but didn't know the definition of (it) , and probably never used] Great physical beauty and appeal. Beauty; comeliness; handsomeness. That quality of appearance which pleases the eye; beauty; comeliness; grace; loveliness. I love KK's rhyme scheme, alliterations, & pen name. to MyPoemList (cont.)
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5/1/2024 10:25:21 AM # 1.0.0.1119
1 - Holy Camoly! ! * KK sent me a poem comment over 2 weeks ago, but when i was going to send her/him a thankyou message, I didn't find a page for KK (dumb me; today i found one) . Then i thought KK was someone else and today that " someone else" said he wasn't. * from Urban Dictionary online: holy camoly: " A spin-off phrase of Holy Cow, used to show surprise in a appropriate and clean way" (cont.)
It's not entirely your fault, Bri. This NEW version of PH is hard to navigate.