Bri Edwards And The Bees Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Bri Edwards And The Bees

Rating: 4.6

I gave a rotten log a kick,
hoping to find a snake.
Instead I found some angry bees;
I'd made a big mistake!

They started stinging my bare head;
I couldn't stand the pain!
I swatted with a sandwich bag,
which scrambled up my brain.

My sandwich got all mashed and flat,
but I still ate it later.
Rather than face those bees again,
I'd choose an alligator.

As I recall that fateful day,
I cannot help but shudder.
How hard it was to pick squashed bees
out of my peanut butter!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bri was telling me that as a young boy he loved to roam the woods. One day he kicked a rotten log, hoping to scare out a snake or something. The ‘something' turned out to be a swarm of angry bees, which began stinging him on the head. He says ‘While bees stung my scalp I pummeled them with a plastic bag in which I was carrying a sandwich.' I asked him if he still ate the sandwich later, but he has not yet responded to that. I also told him that he should write a poem about it. Since he has still not responded, I decided to write one from his viewpoint. I also don't know what kind of sandwich he had that day, but for this poem I am making it be a sandwich of peanut butter and (what else?) honey, of course.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Belle Ringer 24 March 2024

So THAT'S why Bri's brain is all scrambled up. I wondered how he got that way. : ) : ) : )

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Kim Barney 28 March 2024

Ha! Thanks, Belle.

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Rob Lamberton 28 March 2024

What is sweeter than honey? What is stronger than a lion?

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Kim Barney 28 March 2024

Book of Judges in the Bible, chapter 14. Samson was actually stronger than the lion, by the way.

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Smoky Hoss 27 March 2024

Is that a PB-Bee sandwich? !

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Kim Barney 28 March 2024

That's funny, Smoky. Thanks for commenting.

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2024

OOPS. ....I don't even remember 'alligator' being in the poem the first time I read it! ! ! Kim, did you EDIT it? ? ? ? : )

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Kim Barney 28 March 2024

No, Bri, the poem has not been edited. The alligator has been there the whole time.

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2024

I don't even remember 'alligator

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2024

Anyway, we had parked near a large drainage ditch in which an alligator was 'resting'. It was about 6 feet long. I waved a broken tree branch in front of its face. (cont.)

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