Breaking Point Poem by Alison Mujati

Breaking Point

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The breaking point

If feelings hurt us,
It is time to do away.
If it is amour,
I guess it's time to retreat but do not abhor.
If you do,
There s a possibility of either feeling it more,
Or wreck it beyond rehabilitation.
Be the stone and ice cold.
It is the breaking point.

Detach passion in your endeavour
It might be destroying that endeavour.
Brains keep meditating
The monotony is what makes it unimportant.
A mist of vanity is created.
Visions are being brewed head wise,
Together with critic, allbuoyance is irrevocable.
Less venture, less zeal can be supreme
Things will happen in their pace and time
And there could be your breaking.

Self prideis a personality
People hate pomposity.
It is most scrutinized in the life we live in.
Do away with it yet not so modest.
Mildness illuminates defeat.
But it means more than words.
Two contrastive characters of human nature.
Stay grounded and look not on the sides.
Be on the wire,
Do not fall either right or left.
And meet the breaking point.

It is folly to be morebroad-minded more than others.
Yet dullness below everyone can be worse.
Among the blind, one eyed man is a king.
But prepare to be blasted for every catastrophe of having sight.
See everything and warn your contingent.
Br that naive and they blame you for negligence.
Such s life you must live with it.
There is a way out though,
Do away with potency, yet squashing failure.
And be the prince of a kind.
It certainly becomes your breaking point.

Milk serves that allegory
Perhaps there is a way out.
Fresh milk makes taste for tea,
While sour spoils tea if added.
Milk is milk but differs with situations.
Do we have to explain things in situations?
It can be tricky.
Ask children and see analysis,
Send them at tea timeto buy milk,
They bring sour milk.
Crafty and so it seems.
Better do away with sides in life,
Stay between lines and be valued easily
That is the breaking point

Friday, January 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 September 2020

f you do, There s a possibility of either feeling it more, Or wreck it beyond rehabilitation. Be the stone and ice cold. It is the breaking point. the stone and the cold... very fine poem. tony

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