Blunders Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Blunders

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Blunders that brought miseries for the mankind!
Committed by ancestors ignorant and blind,
And I am a descendant I have no alternate,
I will have to repay, it's a write of my fate,
Written by those now sleeping in the graves,
With the helpless souls in a black hole's caves,
I don't know they know or do not know,
Could they see climax of the passing show!
A play incomplete having no definite end,
The anticlimax we can change and amend,
They wrote a painful and touching tragedy,
Come on, let us make it a smiling comedy.

Sunday, October 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 02 October 2016

Blunders that brought miseries for the mankind! Committed by ancestors ignorant and blind, And I am a descendant I have no alternate, I will have to repay, it's a write of my fate, Written by those now sleeping in the graves, - - - - - - - - - - - - A marvelous poem indeed- - -We suffer because of the blunders committed long ago by our ancestors- - - -They wrote a painful and touching tragedy, Come on, let us make it a smiling comedy. - - - - - - - - -Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 03 October 2016

We cannot altogether re write History...... but through conscious effort and strength of will, we can modify and improve upon our heritage! Yes, let us strive to change the 'touching tragedy into smiling comedy'!

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Nosheen Irfan 03 October 2016

A very significant write from your mighty pen. Kudos.10

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2016

Each generation inherits what earlier generations created and possessed through their deeds or misdeeds. Thus, it acquires many a thing in the process- some good some bad. To blame bad ones on the forces beyond its control will be futile. It is for the present generation to act wisely to find a way out for creation of a better world. Thank you, Akhtar Jawad Sahab.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 October 2016

A great thoughtful poem...............................................................

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 October 2016

A play incomplete having no definite end, The anticlimax we can change and amend, They wrote a painful and touching tragedy, Come on, let us make it a smiling comedy. Nice hope, but how to accomplish it sir? Thanks a lot for such a melodious write.10 for it. Subhas

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Khalid Saifullah 03 October 2016

First get rid of extremism then ask the enemy to do the same. First shake the hands with your beloved, she will come close to you, and when you will embrace her, with her lovely soft palms she will push down your head and it will not be you, it will be your beloved who will kiss you.

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