Asking Poem by Indira Renganathan

Beautiful dedication to God. To understand this one need to feel this. One need to live this. Which is not every body's business. Good poetry ma'am.

God always allows us and advice us to have a sun bath under sunlight. When rays fall on skin this makes vitamin-D. There is deep connection between souls. When you think about someone, he thinks about you. This is very natural and it is called telepathy. This is an amazing aspect. Your poem is interesting. I have rad it many times...5 stars..

Brain indicates of your Presence all around To vindicate in words It fails to fill my heart With feeling .... beautifully expressed about the existence of God all around of us thru our pure belief

God is mysterious yet, we can feel the presence all around us. Indeed! it is foolish to ask for a proof.... Yes! indeed, it is like asking for a Sun - Bathing in the broad daylight! Excellent Poem, dear dear Indira Ma'm......5 Stars and more..... :)

The feeling about God is well executed. The last stanza is much impressive. I cite... God Is it like asking for a sun Bathing In the broad day light. Beautiful. Five stars.

To love someone and to be loved, to remember someone and to be remembered they are two different things and you exactly differentiate them......I liked these lines: God Is it like asking for a sun Bathing In the broad day light? ? Superb finish.100*******