Anorexia Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Anorexia

Rating: 5.0


Fire away
Fire at will
Shoot to live
Shoot to kill
Born to die
Born to lose
Light ‘em up
Light the fuse

Endless fight
Endless waves
Mighty force
Mighty slaves
Poison sky
Poison pain
Shrapnel bomb
Shrapnel rain

Bullet sweat
Bullet shell
Given lead
Give ‘em Hell
War for peace
War of dogs
Pray for end
Pray to God

Saturday, November 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: anorexia,battle,death,forlorn,gun,hopeless,soldier,soldiers,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's called Anorexia because in a way, war is the starvation and deprivation of humanity.
A lot of fun to write, but definitely the worst thing I've made so far.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Galina Italyanskaya 27 February 2019

... and this poem is stunning! You've got a talent, and I don't think it's the worst. It's both expressive and impressive.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 February 2019

War for peace War of dogs Pray for end Pray to God.yes war is the end and deprivation of humanity , At your young age you have come to that realization and write beautiful poem about it. lovely. keep it up. be the conscience of humanity through your poems. thank u. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2019

War of dogs! ! ! ! War will never bring us peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2018

Shoot to kill Born to die Born to lose Light ‘em up Light the fuse war is the starvation and deprivation of humanity... so true dear poet....... make others conscious of this...... we shall create a world of love and not of war and conflict......... it is a poet's sublime duty to spread love in this world. tony

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