# # An Unplanned Journey Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # An Unplanned Journey

Rating: 4.1


no travel agent
no travel schedule
no tickets taken
no luggage packed there in
no money taken even
no idea where am goin
no plans of destination even
no....going is not my decision even

like a child
pulled out of it's play
by its parent
i walk along
leaving behind..
...my body

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 27 June 2009

a journey in a dream must be.....interesting...10

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Naidz Ladia 27 June 2009

mental telepathy...or is it only a vision? ...naizz

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 June 2009

True when we came, we were empty handed. When we take the final journey, we go empty handed. This truth is highlighted in the poem well.

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Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

Very impressive, Sam. Don't leave yet, we need you here.: -)

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Fay Slimm 28 June 2009

We can all take that journey at any time Sam - -and glad you have reminded us of the opportunity we have to be - - just free....10 + ++ Fay

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Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

that final journey.....some anxiously await it...some fear it...some don't even bother... whatever be the case the journey has to be taken for once and for ever.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

you bring out well the message on meaning of life...thanks...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 July 2009

very soulful write... When we travel towards our 'main' destination... leaving our body behind us...very touching..very true.. very nice write Sam... maia

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Meggie Gultiano 07 July 2009

and i want to add this, Sam..We are nothing.Somewhere, you left a message and this is very powerful for me..I love this

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Very profound and different samanyan. Our imaginations can take us wherever we want to go. 10 Karin Anderson

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