An Unfinished Story Poem by Iftakar Ifti

An Unfinished Story

Rating: 5.0


You know it's easy to say and you said and then long time flew away
I waited and waited and waited
thousands of time along surprises
Moon shone and slept after midnight
I was waiting with my bare hand and blunder.
there were nothing to shade my shoulder.

I deposited numerous hope and
brought a number of dream for you
I adorned and kept thousands of untold story for you. but you?
you have given a promise to me and forgot thee.
what you've started a never ending journey far from this Maddy island living me in my destiny.

5.16 am
01/02/21

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hard to read. Could not connect the words into meaningful phrases and sentences. The poet needs to take more care.

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Iftakar Ifti

Iftakar Ifti

Habiganj, Bangladesh
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