An Ode To Your Beauty -02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

An Ode To Your Beauty -02

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It was the loveliest..

The loveliest of the moments..


The moment you looked at me

And smiled my answer back..

To the eternal query of my heart

Whether you-

Feel the way I do?

An Ode To Your Beauty -02
Saturday, June 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Kaikeyi 29 September 2017

The moment you looked at me And smiled my answer back.. To the eternal query of my heart Whether you- Feel the way I do? Nice poem shared. So artistic? 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Alina, Thanks for these nice remarks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2017

The moment you looked at me And smiled my answer back.. To the eternal query of my heart Whether you- Feel the way I do? Beautiful poem sir. Thanks for the style of both- the poem and its heroine. 10++++ for them. Sanjukta.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thank you. Thanks Sanjukta for these nice remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. A real ode to beauty.

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Sabita Sahoo 24 June 2017

The moment you looked at me And smiled my answer back. Beautiful, Simple, small yet enjoyable.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Thank you, Thanks Sabita for these nice remarks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 08 November 2017

Yes, really I loved this poem Didi, I agree with you. Eternal beauty is there.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 24 June 2017

The loveliest of the moments.. The moment you looked at me And smiled my answer back.. To the eternal query of my heart...The eternal quest of the heart for the lover's recognition. Thanks for the sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 December 2017

Yes Rini, Thanks for these nice remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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