Agony And Other Things Poem by Satish Verma

Agony And Other Things

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I am trying to read
your mind.There were open questions
lying in the temple of thoughts.

The children of clouds
catch the moon to kiss purely
to be blessed to go to school of love.

Lilies and tulips were
going to marry for the sake ofthorned roses
Blood was flowing slowly. All night you cried.

Saturday, November 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Mahtab Bangalee 21 November 2020

Lilies and tulips were going to marry for the sake of thorned roses BIood was flowing slowly. All night you cried. /// nice; expressive

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 November 2020

Hmmm....the next two verses are about pain and agony....the second i think more about regular repetitive pain.....like menstrual pain. The last one about the pain of heartbreak of love. I think.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 November 2020

There were questions in my head.....done with poetics and flair

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