She said, "You are stupid." My admission,
She said, "You are foolish." My submission,
"May be a bad husband."
Denied it holding her hand,
Now, I am regretting all, my confession!
The intricacies of marriage. So funny. Spur of the moment show of tenderness will utterly change the scenario. Great write. Enjoyed reading it.10
'Admission Submission And Denial' is a fabulous little composition! Liked it so much....10
After admission in the school of marriage, one is left with nothing but submission and confession. No regrets will be entertained. Nice Limerick. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This admission and submission from the side of both husband and wife is the secret to a lasting and happy marriage.....! This makes an interesting read!