<≪≪≪admirable Creature≫≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

<≪≪≪admirable Creature≫≫≫≫

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I.
Thy eyes shine, comely; O Rose,
Thou art mine, love me!
By heart and soul and be close
Before I sleep in my sea.
II.
Lenient are my beams,
Caressing thy rubious shores
And thy redolent dreams
Dwell in thine heart doors.
III.
'Be not silent to me'!
Unto the throbs of heart.
Never depart!
From their songs of glee.
IV.
Let thy love, sempervirent;
Be blossomed as reverent,
Over my green pasture:
As thou art an admirable creature!
V.
Be of good courage!
'O' beloved, in my love
For I shall never cage
Thy wings, O my mate-dove.

Sunday, November 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 29 November 2011

Simply majestic! To write such words of beauty, you must surely be in love... She must surely be admirable, as your poem reflects that adoration. A beautiful poem with exquisite words, my friend.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 November 2011

im speechless my friend......simply amazing piece of poetry...

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Cristina Teodor 02 December 2011

Beautiful written, wonderful style that confer elegance to your verses..Cristina Teodor

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Richard McClellan 05 December 2011

Good write Vipins! Keep exploring, I like your work.

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Divya Gaur 26 December 2011

beautifully written.. :)

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Wahab Abdul 05 November 2013

extraordinary poem, vipin, carry on.. i enjoyed reading your poem....

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 September 2013

Wow.wonderful poem...Each lines to romantically penned. Loved reading it.

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Anita Sehgal 27 December 2012

lovely, beautiful epression..

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Valsa George 03 December 2012

A very emotive write! Beautiful images!

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Neela Nath Das 12 June 2012

Well rhymed, romantic poem.Really awesome.

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