What can I do, what can I say,
to take your pain and fears away?
I feel so helpless as you know,
fearing each day, till the end of your show.
What can stop this beast inside,
full of hate and lack of pride?
What can I do what can I say,
to stop this beast and put fear away?
Is there a cure for this rage within,
an opposite of hatred, sickness, and sin?
You must seek your beam of light,
casting out shadows, darkness, and night.
If I could face this devil for you,
I would gladly tear him in two.
But as you know this can't be done,
you must face him down and make him run.
Run he will and run he must,
when you accept God's love and trust.
For Trust and Love, they are key,
changing your life while walking with Thee.
Then, the race is fixed with an end in sight,
you can bow your head and rest at night!
I know a thing or two about having to watch by the struggle against personal demons...unfortunately we can't fight for our friends or loved ones.
The words just flow off your tongue. This poem has alot of meaning to it. If its an experience you have had, you captured it well.
i like it, it seems like something i would write except your way more...complex. it really speaks to me! thanks for the comments! ! : D i think i know you!
This poem is so good i have no words to explain it. Its more than great...but that's the only word of I can think of right now. Excellent job...
Well stated. As you indicate, nothing can be done until the person is willing to accept help. Only then can help from others come. This most likely has to be help from others. God works not directly but through others.
Very well written. It touches on the hopelessness and frustration we feel when watching our loved ones torn apart by this demon. It shows clearly the only true solution~ God.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, thats was really good.