A Tearful Invitation Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Tearful Invitation

Rating: 5.0


Caress, caress, and very close to granny,
Give a pretty lovely rose to granny,
Sweet are flowers, sweeter are the buds,
Fly round her like the tweeting birds,
She likes butterflies dancing on her face,
Caress, caress and enjoy pink glace.

Darkness of aging needs twinkles and shines,
We know your taste and your favorite dines,
With all the stars Oh Moon! Come tonight,
Cress, caress, we shall enjoy your sight,
We shall sing and dance and dine with delight,
You can make our home so lovely and bright.

Your granny is famous for her lovely dishes,
Have blessings sweethearts and hearty wishes,
You have forgotten it so let me remind,
How painful is old age how cruel and unkind!
It's birthday of your granny she needs gift of love,
Run like a tiger or you may fly like a dove,

But you must come tonight otherwise old clay!
She will not celebrate her lonely birthday! !

Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: grandmother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Tears of a grandmother sometimes inspire to write such poems.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 28 October 2014

The happiness, grand children can give to their grand parents is beyond the expression of words! On their birth day, what they need is not expensive gifts, but the gift of love and the loving company of those whom they thirst to see! A genuine expression of the longings of aged souls! Top marks!

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Paul Sebastian 28 October 2014

A beautiful tribute to one's granny. It is love and gratitude to one who has given so much. I like these lines: Your granny is famous for her lovely dishes, Have blessings sweethearts and hearty wishes, You have forgotten it so let me remind, How painful is old age how cruel and unkind! It's birthday of your granny she needs gift of love, Run like a tiger or you may fly like a dove,

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Wow...Fantastic write.... But you must come tonight otherwise old clay! She will not celebrate her lonely birthday! ! Beautiful description of granny as old clay. Lovely tribute to granny. If granny is surrounded with grandchildren and children, their presence is the beautiful gift which will be cherished by them lifetime. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 October 2014

This poem has been painted with painful brush, someone is angry or far or away from the home and granny is like a clay that may get dispersion in other way this may be last so please turn and attain the granny BD party nice poem well penned the pain

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Salini Nair 29 October 2014

love of a grandmother is a worth throughout life.... great tribute....

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Hazel Durham 28 October 2014

Beautiful write just because we get old we should be cherished for all we gave in our lifetime!

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 October 2014

A heart touching poem....................................

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