A Strong Weaving Poem by Lynn W. Petty

A Strong Weaving

Rating: 5.0


Some lives are made with burlap string,
Some lives are spun with silken thread,
But you wove mine a strong weaving,
From strands of pounded gold instead.

Thursday, January 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 12 May 2016

Lovely rhythm in this poem. It flows really well and the last line is just right for an ending. Delightful to read. Love Ernestine

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Bri Edwards 28 January 2016

could i have a piece of YOUR life? i could use the cash. my life parts are from a junk yard. that's why some are particularly hard. but they're stuck together with spittle... from former quarterback Y. A. Tittle, so each day i advance.....an additional yard. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 January 2016

Strong waving defines life's destination and this poem is entirely nice and interesting. Wise sharing done.10

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Roseann Shawiak 14 January 2016

Beautiful imagery, amazing analogy. Thank you for sharing.

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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