A Storm Struck My Garden Poem by Prabir Gayen

A Storm Struck My Garden

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A Storm struck my Garden

Last night a storm visited my garden,
Broke every nook and corner of my yard,
Thunder and lightning played hide and seek game,
Last night my garden touched the firmament.

I was in deep slumber with dream violent,
Visiting in dream my tempest -born mind,
Pain of heart was pouring like rain on Being,
I was a lone pilgrim to view as seer.

Here and there on my arbor flowers spread,
On the ground they make a florid surface,
Tempest -struck glower like gory oblation,
The Storm was YOUR BLESSING I did realise.

I will give my mind like floral prayer,
Breaking the garden of my mind for YOU.

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@prabir Gayen 25/02/2019 - 11: 10 AM.

A Storm Struck My Garden
Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic M Windram 25 February 2019

A wonderful poem...beautifully expressed!

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Butch Decatoria 25 February 2019

I love lavenders, the Scent of it is calming... nice piece, seems you were speaking to someone your serious about. Maybe beloved god/dess? Carry on, keep on carrying on... kudos.

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Srijita Mondal 25 February 2019

" The Storm was YOUR BLESSING I did realise. I will give my mind like floral prayer, Breaking the garden of my mind for YOU" 💙💚🧡💛🧡💚💙💛

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 February 2019

Pain of heart was pouring like rain on Being, I was a lone pilgrim to view as seer. the inner struggle has been pointed out here like the form a tempest.... very nice symbolic poem. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 February 2019

beautiful poem, beautiful expression I enjoyed

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Poetic Justice 28 August 2020

Here and there on my arbor flowers spread, On the ground they make a florid surface, Tempest -struck glower like gory oblation, The Storm was YOUR BLESSING I did realise..! !

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Poetic Justice 28 August 2020

I was in deep slumber with dream violent, Visiting in dream my tempest -born mind, Pain of heart was pouring like rain on Being, I was a lone pilgrim to view as seer...! !

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Poetic Justice 28 August 2020

Last night a storm visited my garden, Broke every nook and corner of my yard, Thunder and lightning played hide and seek game, Last night my garden touched the firmament..; ;

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Kevin Patrick 27 February 2019

This poem has a fragrance that is bewitching and enchanting, no matter the agonies that heaven reigns in tears of rain, it cannot dissolve its earthly creations of true wonder, nature prevails, and your words prove its fruit. A captivating work!

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Anjandev Roy 27 February 2019

The storm was YOUR BLESSING I did realize........beautiful line. Anjandev Roy.

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