A Sonnet Of Fervour Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

A Sonnet Of Fervour

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I've only one mouth in my face.
Don't you have many in your body?
One at the top and the other at bottom
And the rest of all are in your belly.
When my mouth kisses your mouths
You starts to sound
And if my fingers are in good rhythm
You start to sing too.
Because you are my long fife,
And I'm the fifer, rife in strife with my wife
O, she is not now in my fief.
Tonight our notes can connect together
In a fine tone to intone a tune.
A sonnet of fervour for my wife.

Friday, September 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: riddle poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 24 September 2011

Very poignant write..well written

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Unwritten Soul 25 September 2011

Now i can capture all style in you...The Vipin's style is everywhere here and it's nice sonnet :) Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 05 November 2011

Hey Vipins! When did you don the role of wizard? Yes, I say, you are the wizards of the words as you can play football, cricket and tennis with the words. You produce fun and the pun like this............ 'Because you are my long fife and not my wife. I'm the fifer, rife in strife, with my wife, And she is not now in my fief.' Loud cheers! Can your here? Both for your poetry and you. Have swallowed dictionary or what? Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! :) :) :) :)

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Christina Phan 25 September 2011

Your writing is so wonderful and you are talent writer. Every one got different way of style of writing. What I like about your is not like anyone. This is my favorite peom you ever written.

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Stefanie Fontker 25 September 2011

As said before, very clever writing. Your talent shines here. Beautiful.

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Paul Colvin 25 September 2011

Very clever and unusual thinking behind it. I like it.

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Talal Athar 25 September 2011

O M G THIS IS SO DIFFERENT! ! ! an eye wider! ! epicly fantastically written. loved it

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