A Rainbow Fantasy Poem by lalitha iyer

A Rainbow Fantasy

Rating: 3.8


as a Child
I picked up shells
and kept in my manor
in secret holes
they were my desires
hidden from the public
and soon I forgot
and left them behind

when I grew up
and found new pearls
I neglected the shells
full of soiled soles
but, my mansion dented
and passions demented
my life filled with tides unmeant

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Chandran 04 April 2009

Great flow...great idea........

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Vipins Puthooran 15 December 2011

A well-written poem! ! G'd flow! ! !

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Raj Arumugam 03 May 2010

powerful summary of a life, indeed of many lives, lalitha

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

...... my life filled with tides unmeant.... beautiful, lalitha!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Beautiful observation.10+++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

fantastic and good imaginary effects, that one can visualize it even....this is what I like in good poetry and you are a good and impressive poetess.. well done poetry friend 10++++

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