A Puzzle Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
A Puzzle
You are far away from me
In a distance, alive
Where I can't reach and search of you.
The face of you, I don't know-
The path too in which you pass through
And the smile and your eyes.
Only I know this much,
That is your name, only I know,
And it's I concealed here in my words.
You can make a thousand names from these words.
And if you recite some names
Perhaps I'll say 'YES' or 'NO'.
Where are you 'oh my Love.
My soul is burning inside me.
And only If your name has ignited this much feelings in my heart.
I'll be becoming an ember when you meet me.
If you find me one day before I become into ashes
I'll say....what?
You'll hate me if I say 'I MISSED YOU'.
Hey, are you smiling ''Oh my Love''.
Very interesting perspective. She presently is merely an abstract of desired goods. The speaker desires a beloved and only hopes that when he meets the one he feels he cannot live without she will not refuse him. A thought and desire many share, beautifully expressed. Excellent imagery that the speaker will be a burning ember.
Sugary poem is this poem...Vipins your hands got power by lend us this good moving heart poem, talent to share! Whoever you write for this must be lucky one like Stefanie Fontker said below...But i think all readers will smile at the end of the poem and Raj Arumugam (below) maybe agree with me too! _Unwritten Soul
Passion in the poet was translated into a smooth love poem. Intensity could be felt and it was written with deep thought about love. Excellent poem.....! ! ! !
Its quiet interesting puzzle..... Vipins. Wonderful poem.. Loved the way you wrote.
A burning ember in the name of love.Romantic verses, passion shines in each word you use through your great poetical talent..Cristina Teodor
once again you proved yourself as the master creator. Brain is your support, words are your weapons, Utopian land is your world where you sit in solace to write poems of this quality. You are an outstanding poet with a gift of rare talent. Take it for granted, Soon world will reckon your talent with huge aplomb. Till then wait with smile and in style. I hail thee dear Vipins for your Imagination!
A really beautiful poem, to love someone Is the best. Great write.
How did you know how to pen down my thoughts? :) Got to love poetry, you always find a connection... Thanks for clearing my blurry mind...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very beautiful, whoever this is for is a very lucky person. Great writing.