A Positive Way Poem by Suryendu Chaudhury

A Positive Way

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The sun bears welcome in the eye
beyond today your dreams lie
tomorrow shall be your day
so till the sun shines make hay
and nothing more to say
just be true to the positive way
you are but a piece of clay
and shall continue to stay
what counts is the reach for the sky
to never give up without a try
and what shall matter by the end of day
your eyes lit up for that ray
in the hope of something big or small
that shall add to the benefit of all!

Tuesday, November 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 10 November 2020

'and what shall matter by the end of day your eyes lit up for that ray in the hope of something big or small that shall add to the benefit of all! ' - excellent words concluding a very positive poem.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 November 2020

Lovely. The poem flows like the suns rays. Am inspired to continue on and on and on

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