A Poem - 011 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Poem - 011

Rating: 5.0


A poem

is a piece of art

painted

with colours of desire,

dusted

with lustre of lust,

soaked

with flavours of passion,

bathed

with fragrance of delicacy,

on the canvass

of a lovelorn heart

sitting

under a lonely and thirsty

date palm

On the shores of

the ocean of

timeless love.

Thursday, September 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work,creativity,eternity,love,love and art,poem,poet,poetic expression,timeless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 21 September 2017

On the shores of the ocean of timeless love. ବହୁତ୍ ଭଲ ହୋiଇଛି

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Thanks Neetu for the nice remark.

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Valsa George 22 September 2017

This is beautiful, full of hot passion, painted in lovely colors and displayed as a beautiful art work for all to enjoy! Enjoyed reading your Poem series, Subahas!

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Prativa Rani 01 November 2017

a lovelorn heart sitting under a lonely and thirsty date palm On the shores of the ocean of timeless love. Enjoyed these lines much. 10++ for the poem shared.

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 September 2017

Love has the capacity to evoke voice in a poets heart and this poem reflects the sentivity of words. Beautiful poem compliments.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

A beautiful poem with high degree of poetic skill and imageries.

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

a lovelorn heart sitting under a lonely and thirsty date palm On the shores of the ocean of timeless love. A great poem with high poetic essence, rich in passion..thanks poet for the sharing. 10++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Thanks Priyanka for the nice remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

On the shores of the ocean of timeless love. Lovely line. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the sharing of this poem. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

Thanks Sabita for the nice remark.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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