A small part out of all the happiness thine,
My Lord, I request thee to part with me
May that part purify all the parts in me!
My body, my intelligence, my mind-
My part, I understand, is to serve thee,
Until the day I depart from this world
A part of the profit I thus derive,
I promise to all my willing partners,
that partakes in thy holy service
I accept all parts thus imparted to me
For I know not- ever- what thou hath written
In the secret codes, on my part line hair apart
Amazing prayer chant…Uncle ‘How can I read, what you have scribed /There on my parting line, apart? ’ Such earnestness will reach to Master …and poet’s voidness will be fulfilled by Bliss Because God is ‘quick-eared’…ever minuscule of prayer reaches Him…as I’ve read in book of Ramakrishna where He says, ‘He can hear the jingle of ankle bangle of ant’ 10/10+ hf Ms. Nivedita UK
Such good use of alliteration makes the prayer sound melodious. Fantastic!
your prayers to cleanse all the body parts would never go in vain....The lord shall listen your cry....
Nice prayer: good thought - simple, but expressed in a unique way. Vanita.
You are indeed a good bargainer, knowing perfectly well that even a fraction means.... I think it's a great prayer and well compiled, may God always be kind to you!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
touching write...honest prayer.. meaningful thoughts.. offering God your All... very divine piece... 10+++ maia