A Girl With A Goal! ! ! Poem by krystal vincent

A Girl With A Goal! ! !

Rating: 5.0


I see a life of a girl
Shes been hurt
Shes felt devastated
Shes had a lot of wreckage.
but yet she live her life and does what she does best.
She trys to succeed at every test.

I see a life of a girl
she smiles
she laughs
She has fun with her family and friends.
Shes always loyal
shes always there until the very end.
She lives life to the fullest
she trys very hard.
Shes capable of anything.
Shes very smart.

I see a life of a girl
She makes mistakes
She lies
She does drugs
She cuts.
Shes in trouble
she can't deal with her struggles.
She tries to succeed but she fails
fails at everything.
Thats the girl at age seventeen.

I see a life of a women
She is and always will be a success.
She lived her life through all the terrible mess.
She has a job,
Shes married, and is raising three kids.
Shes finally of age, and has a since of security.

I see a life of a women
shes a women of love success and happiness.
shes a women that had a goal and went with it.
shes a women who didn't believe she would make it but she did.
Shes a women of her word, an no longer that little girl people use to know.
Shes now greater, better in life and is known as a pro.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 08 July 2009

Over her shoulder she looks back at the past...ahead she smiles knowing the future holds the key to unlock the pain and set her free.....her past paved in mistakes that many have made...laid the stones that she once walked upon hoping that freedom from life, was escape with no comebacks.....in reflection she stands and looks into the waters...the image is not one she knows....and as if stolen...the past dissolves as she climbs upon the waves and sails into the future where she meets her goals.......happiness now her own.

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Surya . 25 July 2009

very descriptive poem.methodically explained. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Surya . 25 July 2009

very descriptive poem.methodically explained. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Broken Heart 12 July 2009

ohh! ! very sweet poem! ! nyc way of expressing ur self!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 July 2009

may she would touch the pinnacles........victory is waiting for her...... 'to err is human' 'after clouds come fair weather' 10+ for this vivid expression.

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Luwi Habte 08 July 2009

oh! this is so very nice poem, i like it very much well done poet luwi

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krystal vincent

krystal vincent

fort worth texas, terrant county
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