A Final Sundown Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

A Final Sundown

Rating: 5.0


blooms mass in a vase
a vivid get together
days in sun recalled

wild hours of weather
when they were younger so green
remembering scenes

sunset blooms laughing
comparing lovely costumes
in a fragrant room

A Final Sundown
Wednesday, March 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,sweet,flowers,beauty,colors,remember,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photograph courtesy of Brigitte Werner at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

And congratulations, Evelyn. This poem has already secured a place among the Best Poems of members. May it soar to the top!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 March 2023

Thank you very much for your gracious words of congratulations.

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Extraordinarily truthful to the colourfulness of the blooming spring flowers and their reflection in the skies in the form of sunset. Beautifully penned. The metaphors augment the beauty… 5*..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 March 2023

Thank you very much for the pleasure of your appreciation. So delighted that you enjoyed it.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 March 2023

Astounding imagination dear Buehler.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 March 2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 March 2023

this beautiful poem took my breath away Evelyn I render speechless of the beauty Bravo! ! ! !

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 March 2023

I'm so delighted, LeeAnn. Thank you very much for your kind expressions.

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Anjandev Roy 22 March 2023

Just brilliant.....thanks for sharing.....

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 March 2023

You're most welcome. Thank you for your kind thoughts.

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