A Field Of Hay Bales Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

this brilliant simile is working very well here, congratulation you are so good

this marvellous piece of work only can be written by a skillful great poet such as Rose, it is so poetic and strong, with good metaphor and imagery, well done have a big 10+ and it goes onto my fav list

The big round hay bales That lie across the farm field Like small fortresses

Remind me of my childhood.......significant.....thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

It's nostalgic to dig out the childhood enjoyments. The imagery you have created to express it is appreciable. Hay bales deserve a prime place among the properties made use of as a support of games, especially hide and seek. Effective imagery. Superb.

As a person engaged in farming, I could relate directly with the images. And those of my childhood, when we used to play hide and seek among the hay bales, literally. Enjoyed the poem so much. It's brevity speaks volumes, Rose Marie. Loved it.

Oh, beautifully beautifully painted! .. Such wonderful sentiments! .. And precious memories of childhood! .. Marvelous! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Memories! ! Musing along with your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes! ! ! I always flinch when I see round bales! I was accustomed to rectangular hay bales that were si easy to break into meal sized flakes for the different horses. I look at those round bales and my head tilts and my mind goes round and round on how to divide that monster up. Now you have given me something pleasant to think about! ! ! Thank you! ! ! 10++ and onto my fav list! ! !

The bale of hay The dome of hay Reminder bell in the busy mind in the busy thought the childlike and childish game hide and seek ...........yes exactly right you are; beautifully crafted