A Cool Breeze Poem by john o'connell

A Cool Breeze



a cool breeze
shaves the contours
of my face
in a night lit
by a thousand warm
stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robyn Selters 24 June 2010

Wow! This is truly beautiful in its simplicity.

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Aine Carroll 24 May 2010

I can just imagine you smiling. I admire the way you write and get your ideas across so easily.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 February 2010

short, straight, and simple but it has a unique beauty

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john o'connell

john o'connell

Limerick, Ireland
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