A Cool And Passive Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Cool And Passive

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“You are not expressive”
“Neither assertive nor submissive”
“You remain cool and passive”
This makes me all the time restive

I was taken a back at her remark
I was on new path to embark
She was there for me to stand by
I was to propose her and try

She did everything in her control
I was feeling uneasy while making stroll
She was feeling merely a show piece or doll
I was at dilemma how to scale a high wall

It is female tendency to have nice words in praise
They want it all the times with no controversy to rise
It is big boost their thinking if we make any surprise
They may slowly loose their ground to move very wise

There is nothing wrong to fall in love and surrender
It is acknowledgement of feeling between receiver and sender
There may not take place exchange of lovely words
Still there is hope of meeting and looking forward

So much is expected from women folks
They may indulge less in talks
What do they expect in return?
May be strong response to come from her friends in turn

No sugar coat or sweet words can come to rescue
It is nice feeling and love that is over due
She may like to have nothing in special
She may eagerly wait upon his arrival

Love and affection may rule the scene
Such a strong bond is never seen
Both are committed to certain ideals
The future life may convert it into real

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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