A C P C - 2015/05 New Challenge Poem/Title Contest - Info Poem by Brian Johnston

A C P C - 2015/05 New Challenge Poem/Title Contest - Info



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NEW CHALLENGE POEM/TITLE CONTEST
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The May contest will take place on my site. Sorry that various problems interfered with an April Contest which never materialized. Other PH poet's who are interested in helping with or hosting this ongoing contest please let me know. The new challenge for May is to write a poem from the perspective of an actual historical character or even a literary fictional character if you chose. Any poetic form is permissible.

My own entry this month is based on the legend of Orpheus and Eurydice. My poem's author is Orpheus and the he is writing a good bye poem to Eurydice after he has just lost her for the 2nd and final time.

Previous rules published will be adhered to. Only one entry per poet unless you co-author a poem with another poet. In such a case the major and minor roles must be clearly discussed in poet's notes.

Any poem received before midnight on May 31,2015 will be considered a valid entry. Late entries may be posted but no votes for them will be counted.


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My Name Is Simply Orpheus

My name is simply Orpheus,
Could you be my Eurydice?
What curse the parent of this fuss?
Though blind I feel that you are there,
My eyes like pools of saltern sea,
Still I hear music in your hair,
Vibrating strands, chords on my lyre,
That charms the bitterness in me,
And still can set my soul on fire.

God’s DAMN the Gods that took your life
Damn serpent, flesh that gave me name!
Pale muse, lost solace, soul mate, wife,
What care I if Apollo dies.
The sea extinguish sun’s bright flame!
The God’s care not for human cries,
Their intrigue plagues the firmament
Are Whores that ply for only fame
With human blood apparent rent.

The voice she loved has caused my fall
From love to such obscurity …..
The jealousy of Gods is all.
Though lyre and music won her heart,
The Shades command eternity,
With hearts like ice and faces dour.
All action just poor player’s part,
That struts and frets for but an hour,
On stages only Gods can see.

Brian Johnston
April 5,2015

Poet’s Notes:
A love poem from Orpheus to Eurydice that he composes after he has lost her a second time just after almost rescuing her from Hades and before his own death.



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My Name Is “Kong”: Wrong! ….. [movie ‘monster’; From The ‘monster’s’ Mouth; A Bit Long; For Brian Johnston’s PH May ‘contest’] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Hollywood made, of me, a movie …..
some thought scary, others thought groovy.
In it I was called “King Kong”;
boy, were those people ever wrong!

“Skull Island” they called my land.
Boy, those people were out of hand.
I’ll tell the truth, if it be told.
I’m descended from men of old!

Back before “Man” ’s current state,
I came from creatures very great.
We did not use the word “creatures”;
we used NO words, nor had we teachers.
We were a flawless race (so we thought) ….
until near-extinction was once brought.

We used no words. We lived in peace.
Happiness we felt would NEVER cease …,
until the month of those Deadly Rays …
which brought an end to happier days.

We were not unlike you totally,
but unlike you ….. we were war-free.
We had plants and other kindred life.
We lived peacefully; we had no strife.

Then rays unlike those from the sun ….
began to strike; we tried to outrun …..
them.
As I said before, we used no words,
no words for lizards, palms, or birds.
But I “speak’ NOW with words …. you do know;
from my spirit, they NOW do flow.

The rays brought …. to some, Death.
At first they just slowed my breath,
but I and others began to grow,
becoming what Hollywood did show.

I’d NOT looked like “Kong”, the ape,
but slowly my body took his shape.
What had been the creatures, least,
became monstrous growling BEASTS!

But still we lived in peace,
like sheep in fake wolves’-fleece.
[To YOU, fearsome was my outside,
which, my good nature, did hide ….
from your eyes.]
And our lives became extended;
FEW of our lives have ended.

I was centuries old when you came …
to “Skull Island”. What a name!
You little people came; you CAME!
“Skull Island” has never been the same! !

First there were half-naked little men,
who came by canoe, I know not when.
They lived in fear of our race, and ….
FEW of them ever saw my face.

Many more years then went by …
before more came, we knew not why …
at first.
They came by ship to our shore …
with guns, nets, and a whole lot more.
These men wore MORE clothing,
but they ALL deserved my loathing.

They caught me in a trap of rope,
and since then ….. I lost my hope.
My hope of freedom! I was lost …..,
THOUGH I’d survive, at any cost.

It took scores of men ….. to get me..…
into the ship’s cage. We went by sea …
across thousands of miles, and came …..
to New York City, a place of shame.

“Shame” because I was displayed …
for all the people who PAID ….
to see “King Kong”; what a show!
My new-found anger soon did grow …
by leaps and bounds.
Then one day I got so, SO mad.
The people made me MAD; they HAD.

I found a weak spot on my cage,
and shook the bars in fits of rage.
They screamed “Look out for the Ape!
The bars bend and he’ll escape! ! ”

Escape I did, but where to go?
Police scrambled; whistles they did blow.
Some shot at me; the bullets stung.
Back at them I threw my dung [my “poop”].

The rays had made me TOUGH;
handgun shots were NOT enough …
to stop me.
I roamed the streets; people ran.
Over cars my legs did span.
I was angry; my teeth I bared,
but deep down …. I was really SCARED!

I had lost my people AND my home.
Through a strange city I did roam.
And I was hungry and thirsty too.
If you’d been me, what would YOU do? ?

Around me now buildings SOARED;
I’d lost NOW my room and board.
I was hunted like a wild beast.
Upon my blood, men wished to feast!

Or so it seemed to me that day …..,
so I fled, till at last …. I was at bay.
I had nowhere else to flee but UP,
but I’d climbed since I was a pup, i.e. ….
a baby.
I chose the tallest building of all,
the Empire State Building; it was TALL.

Up I went from ledge to ledge,
with hands and feet on each window edge.
A woman screamed to see me. Well ….,
YES I DID grab her, and I did (her) smell.

BUT I really meant her NO harm,
and gently lowered her by her arm ….
back through the window into her room.
THAT’S when I heard the first queer BOOM!

Then I saw flying machines come.......,
like “Skull Island” insects [some].
Each had a small man inside,
and bullets began to pierce my hide.
These were not JUST bullet stings,
but HOLES caused by the machines with wings …
AND machine guns.

I roared in rage, and PAIN too.
What, oh what, could I then do?
My end was near; I could see …. IT.
THEN I grabbed one plane in my angry fit.

But more flying machines came,
and bullets did more than just maim.
Weakened, in shock and losing blood,
I fell to the pavement with a THUD! .

[What they knew as “King Kong” ….
died that day; it was so WRONG ….
that, for being “different”, I had died.
They killed my body, but NOT my pride! ]

My skeleton’s displayed in a museum,
along with my brain, for all to see ‘em.
My hide is mounted on a frame ….. to mimic me,
and displayed at an Explorers’ Club, NOT for free.
My soul has returned to MY LAND,
and by tropical breezes now is fanned ….
for Eternity.

(May 6 & 7,2015)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
May 2015 Poetry Contest
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 01 February 2015

Wonderful challenge really in contest. Hope for sure success.

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Bri Edwards 02 February 2015

ok, brian, other than the typo in the title of the non-poem poem which is the lead-in to this month's contest [which you will undoubtedly correct BEFORE someone else sees it], here is my first comment. instead of making it easier for poets to join in the contest, you've made it more difficult (I think) by the limitations set for a required poem entry. of course some poets may eat this up, this idea of echoing a poem which THEY haven't written. and you DID give the choice (i think) of echoing one of two or more poems you mentioned. BUT your explanation is not terribly clear to me, especially this part: This months contest requires not only a poem written by you with its own title but a title for the new Echo poem that results as well. i think you are referring to e.g. Being At Choice (the title of the poem written by Brian J.) and On The Right Side Of The Bed (the title of the co-authored poem by Lora and Brian) . NO! i got that mixed up, didn't i? ? ? ? and i don't see Lora's poem, but just the title, and i thought you suggested 'we' write a response to her poem, I Woke Up. i suppose we could do that by checking out her site on PH. and the same is true, i suppose (i really KNOW!) , about your poem about 'bifurcated brian'. hmmm? how many poets will really go for this echo challenge? ? ? it should be interesting. i bet i CAN make a humorous poem! how much ya wanna bet? ? huh? ? bri :) don't forget to correct the typo! welcome back, i think.

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2015

apparently the monthly contest is a dying creature. perhaps we should just let it die a quiet death. i bequeath my vote to Brian Johnston. this means YOU, Brian, get to cast my vote for me, if you wish. so either you or i or neither will be the winner! hurray for whomever! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 02 June 2015

well BJ, this is shaping up to be the battle of the giants! ! ! two contestants bent on destroying each other! NO, I'M NOT talking about 'Kong' and a fighter plane. i'm talking about you and me. perhaps me conceding defeat would be all around easier and less messy? or flip a coin? ? MY coin of course! bri :) p.s. maybe you need to rethink the challenge-premise more, or tweak it a bit, or advertise more? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 22 May 2015

hey Bozo Brian, why do you have comments below from february and why is the date for last submission [[for MAY]] FEBRUARY 28TH? ? ! love and kisses, bri :)

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2015

i sent one. where is it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ? ok, i just sent it a while ago. :) bri

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Bri Edwards 12 February 2015

ok, it is the 12th of february, the day my (actually yours; i just took the helm for the last two months while you RESTED!) january challenge contest comes to an end. this is the last day to vote and it looks like Darlene Walsh is rushing to the finish line ahead of the herd. i hope someone is going to take up the february challenge. i mean to, and probably will if i don't forget. :) bri

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