A Bang Up Sunset Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

A Bang Up Sunset

Rating: 5.0


Gold birds at sunset
gliding ribbons of color
crowned by falling night
Far off visions in blooms lure
Beneath red firecracker stars

Cream moon's following
with determined velvet light
aiding dusky plight
Cherry red before they bed
velvet green and goodbye sun

A Bang Up Sunset
Saturday, May 27, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: stars,beauty,full moon,sunset,colors,birds,good night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in the tanka form. Photograph courtesy of Ilona Ilyes at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 29 May 2023

Such vivid imagery, summer sunsets can be really beautiful

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Your valuable remarks are greatly appreciated.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 May 2023

Beautiful Tanka Evelyn

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I deeply appreciate your warm response.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 May 2023

velvet green and goodbye sun.......magnificent!

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Thank you for your gratifying remarks.

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