018 ~ Like A Kite Poem by stan pelfrey

018 ~ Like A Kite

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a robust south wind blew today
caught my baggy clothes
from behind, the arms
of my sweater and pants legs
flailed briskly in the breeze

closing my eyes, I felt like a kite
putting hands in my pockets,
I let go of my body
and went to that child
in my subconscious

the wind in my hair,
rocking back and forth
in my shoes,
I was floating above everything
soaring not to see or be seen
but to catch more wind,
surf the skies, escape

a wide smile on my face
as the wind died down
gliding gently down
back to earth
like a kite

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 08 September 2008

gone with the wind for the memories to rewind nice phrase - and went to that child in my subconscious...highlight of your poem

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