You Are Not Changed Poem by ramesh rai

You Are Not Changed

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Every thing is changed
values of life is also changed
sun and moon are faded
twinkling stars are beguiled
seasons are changed so many times
dawn and dusk are also elapsed
elevation of celestial order is changed
fundamental law of nature is also changed
but you are not changed.

In every spring you come with shower of new flower
with new fragrance with your virginal youth
melody of your sweetness is more enchanting.

In every autumn resonance of your presence
echos in all directions with your vividity.

In every rainy season you strew
your melody with each drop of rain
melody of sweet musical rythem
cohere the entire atmosphere

But

your smile is as sweet as honey is
your wrath is as hot as fire is.

Thursday, November 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 21 November 2014

sun and moon are faded twinkling stars are beguiled seasons are changed so many times dawn and dusk are also elapsed elevation of celestial order is changed......................everything had changed...nice work

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2014

''fundamental law of nature is also changed but you are not changed.''-beautiful poem

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Neela Nath Das 21 November 2014

A beautiful poem indeed.It reminds me of Shakespeare's sonnet- - - -Shall I compare thee.10 of course.

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Amitava Sur 30 November 2014

A revelation of nature's beauty, so pure and unadulterated. It emanates it's beauty within so many changes otherwise.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2014

A beautiful description of nature's steadiness. It's our mood that brings apparent changes in nature. A nice poem.

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Neela Nath Das 23 November 2014

your smile is as sweet as honey is your wrath is as hot as fire is. - - - - - - -loved these lines.The compare and contrast style is nice.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

Again nature or God is still the same- your smile is as sweet as honey is your wrath is as hot as fire is. beatiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2014

elevation of celestial order is changed fundamental law of nature is also changed but you are not changed.- -very nicely envisioned. Celestial is sublime. Many thanks.

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