Utterly Lovely Poem by John deVries

Utterly Lovely



How utterly unutterably lovely you are
Glenda Lee, who helps attend the bar
At Lancelot's where the silver skulls gleam
'Neath the glow of bright incandescent beam
Where Jerry Chiemsee sometimes would play
On the piano in his own florid way

But that is beside the point

I wish I could allow myself to fall for your charms,
Glenda Lee, though my advances might sound alarms
In your mind, since there is no doubt
That you've been approached by many who seemed devout
Whose devotions have been tempered by liquor
Who, if they got their way, might do nothing but snicker

But that is being crude

Glenda Lee, I don't know why seeing you
Leaves me breathless, without a clue,
Affects me this way, makes me think thoughts,
write rhymes, makes me feel so overwrought,
Makes me want to find out who you are
Glenda Lee, who helps attend the bar

And that is the end of this piece

Wednesday, August 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Yet again, ALL of the names have been changed to protect the innocent. On the other hand, wasn't the Good Witch in The Wizard of Oz(tm) named Glenda or some such? The bar was real, the piano player was real, the crowd was real and so was the beauteous 'Glenda'. This one almost looks like a conventional poem. Perhaps I was drunk? The scansion is close, but no cigar. Chiemsee, btw, is a lovely lake in Bavaria with a wonderful hotel on the south side in which I got to spend a couple of weeks for two years, the first time during the first manned Moon mission(1969) . The hotel was used by the German officers during WWII for rest and relaxation and subsequent to the war, for NATO personnelle - which is a tad bizarre.
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